Some people think that criminals should be given longer term imprisonment, so as to reduce the crime rate. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
crime
is a serious problem in all countries. nowadays, violation increases rapidly in our life. Few locals believe that to decrease the rate of Use synonyms
crime
it is necessary for criminals to give them long punishments. Use synonyms
Although
, I agree and believe that given longer-term prison to the criminal is beneficial, in some cases alternative ways are better. I will discuss both aspects in an upcoming essay.
On the one hand, there are several benefits of long term imprisonment to tackle Linking Words
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In other words
, big punishments are necessary for those who do serious crimes Linking Words
such
as murder, violence and so on. Linking Words
Therefore
, offenders are not made to mix with society. Lifetime punishment discourages people to do Linking Words
crime
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as a result
they think twice before attempting a Linking Words
crime
. They get an opportunity for rehabilitation that are available inside the jail. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, spending time in long imprisonment provides the chance to rethink what they did and Linking Words
then
they realize his or her guilty. Longer prisons strike fear in the heart of people.
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On the other hand
, there are better alternative ways Linking Words
instead
of lifetime punishment Linking Words
such
as education training and so which offenders do minor mistakes Linking Words
likewise
shoplifter, pickpockets etc. It is not good for those people, if they leave with serious criminals Linking Words
then
they become characterwise bad Linking Words
consequently
they do not improve their character. They get wrong information and guidance from other criminals if government spend money on their education and training Linking Words
then
they give positive feedback to society Linking Words
for example
they help in constructing the building and as a farmer in harvesting.
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lifetime punishment. I agree with Change preposition
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alternative
way is better for minor mistakes.Correct article usage
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