Some people think that we can not learn anything from the past for our life today, while others believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand human life. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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the discussion regarding whether the historical heritages are
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useful
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under terms
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debate. in my
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history
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contribution to the country,
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useful
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that the prosperities for most of the nations
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historical spirit.
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itself, by
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, the failure and the trial of the entire humanity,
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therefore since
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ancient
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consequences
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future development that
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the nation to avoid the same mistake that the ancient people has already
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the other hand, it is
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history
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, where it may pale in
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significant
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to practical uses like economic and social development. these people always defence themself by providing some
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irrelevant
information like the fact that the USA is built on the ground where it is only
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inhabited
or civilized for only 200 plus years. the fatal
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certain
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data
however
, they just proposed that
history
is not a
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necessity
for a country's prosperity
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