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The given illustration compares the amounts spent on
restaurant
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foods
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 and home ‎cooking
foods
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 in four different years and gives data on the number of
meals
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 eaten ‎in two different
restaurant
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 types.‎ As is presented in the pie chart,
initially
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 in 1970, 90% of the total food budget ‎was spent on
home-made
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homemade
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foods
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 while only 10% was spent on
restaurant
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foods
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. ‎The amount spent on
restaurant
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meals
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 increased to 15% in 1980 while it reached ‎‎35% in 1990.
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, in 200, an average family spent half of the total budget on ‎
restaurant
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meals
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, which shows a rapid increase in the people’s habit of having ‎
meals
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 in restaurants.‎ In the line graph, we can observe that in 1970, the fast
foods
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 and sit-down ‎
restaurant
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meals
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 were taken 20 persons, and times each, and over time, these ‎numbers kept increasing.
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, in 2000, more than 90
personsand
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persons and
persons
 fast food ‎
meals
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 were eaten while sit-down
restaurant
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meals
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 were eaten 50
personsand
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persons and
 times ‎a year. It indicates the changes in people’s habit of eating out and the popularity ‎of
restaurant
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foods
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 over
home-made
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homemade
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foods
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.‎ Overall, over 30 years, people adopted eating out at restaurants, and sit-down ‎restaurants gained more popularity over the fast-food shops.‎
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