Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some individuals are of the opinion that authorities should increase
railways
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rather than
roads
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. While I agree that
railways
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may benefit the residents of
countryside
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the countryside
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and make
contribution
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to a healthier environment rather than
roads
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, I believe that as far as quiet atmosphere and
time
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is concerned growth in
roads
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seems more satisfying. On the one hand, raising the number of
railways
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can be considered as a positive trend.
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, when it comes to rural people, regarding the size of rails which do not
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large space, building
railways
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in mountainous
areas
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which are generally located in
countryside
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the countryside
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is easier than
roads
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.
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, the inhabitants of these places have easy access to
cities
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and they can transport more conveniently.
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, from
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environmentally
environmently
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friendly perspective, building
railways
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has resounding effects on decreasing
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air pollution,
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trains
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are able to transport a large number of people in comparison with cars.
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may decrease the cars’ usage.
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, governments by investigating in
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can decrease
the cars emissions
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which lead to dropping the weather contaminants.
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, when it comes to the
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inhabitants of big
cities
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, their preference is building of more
roads
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.
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the construction of
railways
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may enable the residents of urban
areas
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to transport to other
cities
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and places better, regarding
time
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, many residents of megacities regret using
trains
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because they find it very tiring and
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time consuming
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.
Generally
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the movement of
trains
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is very slow which has a speed limitation. So
travelers
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may spend
long
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time
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to get
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to their destination.
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, by driving your personal car, it takes about 5 hours to get to Tehran from Esfahan whereas when it comes to
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it may take about 10 hours.
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,
generally
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trains
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are very crowded and noisy. The citizens of crowded
areas
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who are generally seeking
for
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silent
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and peace may not find
trains
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a relaxing place.
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, they are less enthusiastic about using
trains
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. All in all, increasing
railways
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may benefit rural
areas
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.
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, building more
roads
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in the
center
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of
cities
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probably is more practical.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Carbon emissions
  • Mass transportation
  • Traffic congestion
  • Economic growth
  • Regional development
  • Initial investment
  • Feasibility
  • Flexibility
  • Rural areas
  • Integration
  • Sustainable
  • Efficiency
  • Infrastructure
  • Commuters
  • Public expenditure
  • Autonomous vehicles
  • Long-term investment
  • Accessibility
  • Connectivity
  • Modal shift
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