Many criminals re-offend after they have been punished. Why do some people continue to commit crimes after they have been punished, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

Crime
is
pevasive
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pervasive
in nature and many countries failed to
control
the rate of
recidivisum
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recidivism
. There are many factors, which are the root cause of increasing
crime
by re-offenders. Indeed, some strong action should be taken by
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government
goverment
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as well as society to
control
the rate of
crime
. In
this
essay, I will discuss the reason
of
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increasing
crime
by
offender
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an offender
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after long
prinsion
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prison
pension
and how to
control
this
by adapting some
messure
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measure
. There are two main reasons, which
inforce
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enforce
criminal to re-commit the
crime
.
Firstly
, If a
prisionor
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prisoner
comes from criminal background or has a friend involved in drugs or burglaries. It's
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a hight
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hight
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high
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chance to re-commit the
crime
.
Secondly
, another major factor is
porety
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poetry
poverty
and
unemployement
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unemployment
. After taking incarceration society is not able to
acept
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accept
the criminal as a normal person and not give any employment to them.
As a result
, they face poverty and unable to
servive
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service
survive
.
This
kind of situations
force
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them to be re-offender. To
control
the rate of recidivism its require to take proper actions by
government
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the government
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along. In
prison
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the prison
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rehablitation
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rehabilitation
proccess
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process
for addiction of drugs,alcohol should
be include
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in order to
control
devasting effects after
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the exit
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exit
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of criminal. and
this
should include from the very
first
day of
offender
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the offender
an offender
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.
In addition
to
this
life
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,life
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skils
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skills
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should
be teach
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, that will help them to prepare
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themself
themselves
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them self
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themself
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for employment after imprisonment.
for example
, in Norway
prisonor
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prisoner
learn all skills required for
job
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a job
the job
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during their time in
prision
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prison
. In conclusion, to
control
the re-offender ts
vvery
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very
important to give proper education to criminals so that they
servive
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survive
service
after
imprision
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imprison
and at the same time
socity
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society
also
need to
acept
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accept
them and treat them as a human not criminal.
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