Some people say that health care and education should be the responsibility of the government while others think that it is the responsibility of the individuals themselves. Discuss both the views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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era, health and education both play

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vital role in the everyones' life, where it is

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not easy to handle due to

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inflation, majority of people usually expect that

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problem should be solved by the

government

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, while

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others

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believe that it can be done by the

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individuals

themselves. As the rate of population rockets every year, the demand for the academics and hospitals

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surge,

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, each

parents

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want their children to get educated and acquire

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university degree, so that they could able to get

job

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in the renowned enterprise,

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, after the arrival of the Covid-19, now each person gets

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about their health, where enormous pressure can be seen in the medical sectors.

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, the more there are stipulations from the citizens, the

more

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higher pressure will be on the

government

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, where they are inducing the responsibility on them because when the former fails to handle the situation, in the case of income,

familly

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family

matter, or the corrupted system,

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all weapons are laid to the latter

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because they believe that it is only the

government

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, who can handle as they believe that they have given the vote, now the latter will be the one, who will handle their situations. If they failed to do so,

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they

threat

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them

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to demolish their power in the

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elections. While, in reality, it is an

induvidual

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individual

duty to handle the situation because the

government

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can only

helps

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help

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in constructing and funding the educational institutions and hospitals,

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, they can provide some support by providing medical supports, like

during

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pandemic, the

government

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have aided in providing the sanitizations kits, increase the vaccination productions and provide it free to the public, but they cannot help in spending money on admissions or pay whole fees on the hospital bills. In that case, if everyone

expect

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expects

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that the

government

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help,

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it is

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neccessary

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necessary

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from us by paying the income tax monthly, we all feel it

unneccessary

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unnecessary

, but in

reality

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it works the best, if we will do so,

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the

government

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will

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able to increase in developing the more edifice and great quality.

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,

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, we must

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maintain and keep clean,

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try to improve the quality of hospitals by keeping sanitize regularly, refurbish it if

neccessary

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necessary

. In Conclusion, every each

induvidual

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individual

have to stand

itself

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for itself

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as we cannot fully rely on the

government

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