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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this case? What can be done about this problem?

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Nowadays, numerous
people
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 are still facing hunger regardless of the modern
technology
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 being used in the farming
field
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. The main cause of
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 issue is overpopulation, and the most vital solution is the help develop
countries
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 to poor
nations
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. The main reason for
people
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 getting hungry despite advances in the
agriculture
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field
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 is the growing population. The growth of population has increased distinctly in the
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 few decades,
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result
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 the main resources of nourishment have not been sufficient for all
people
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 around the world, especially for poor
nations
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.
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, the population is expected to reach between 8 and 10.5 billion between 2040 and 2050. A long term solution to
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 predicament is for developed
countries
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 to aid poor
nations
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 with the latest
agriculture
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technology
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 in the farming
field
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. We all know how
technology
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 in farming with all modern equipment could help for
agriculture
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 and provide sustenance for all the sheer number of global citizens to reduce famine.
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, the United Arab of Emirates invests in the farming
field
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 in South Africa to be number one in farming in the world, and exports all the essential sustenance to other poor
countries
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. In conclusion, overpopulation is one of the main issues we face and so far
people
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 are still hungry. To tackle
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 problem is to provide advanced
agriculture
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technology
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 to help poor
nations
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 by developed
countries
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.
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Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic

Problem-and-solution essays fall naturally into two parts, the first describing and exploring the problem, the second setting out the solution or solutions.

You essay structure should look something like this:

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – Problems
  • Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • One of the first problems of the...
  • Another problem that needs to be considered...
  • A possible solution to this problem would be...
  • One immediate practical solution is to...

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inequality
  • distribution
  • access to resources
  • climate change
  • natural disasters
  • political factors
  • economic factors
  • agricultural practices
  • infrastructure
  • transportation
  • population growth
  • education
  • knowledge
  • food waste
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