Some people think one should stay all their life in the same job, whereas others advocate changing jobs from time to time. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Good
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A good
job
is a significant stimulator to improve prosperity and well-being.Number
of people believe that a Change the article
A number
The number
person
should remain in the same job
in their career .However
, some chunks of folks assumes
that a Change the verb form
assume
job
change is essential from one period to another. The forthcoming essay will discuss both aspects prior to my Correct your spelling
viewpoint
view point
.
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viewpoint
Firstly
, doing the same job
for a long period of time makes a man perfect in that task which help
to enrich his skills and knowledge in that subject. And the Change the verb form
helps
person
who is employed in that job
will get a
satisfaction in his work Remove the article
apply
also
because he is mastered in his works which helps
to Change the verb form
help
acheive
their organisation task more efficiently and effectively within the time limit. Correct your spelling
achieve
Likewise
, if a person
is doing the same job
for years in the same company he can create a good relationship and a
trust with other employees Correct article usage
apply
also
thereby create a harmonious environment in that organisation.For example
, My cousin is working in a private company around
36years , started her career as Change preposition
for around
accounts
executive , later she was promoted Add an article
an accounts
as
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to
chief
financial officer in that department.Add an article
a chief
Although
she started in clerical
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a clerical
job
, through her connections and with trust among them she was promoted to new
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the new
a new
job
title.
However
, negative impacts also
exist and the major pitfall associated with same
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the same
job
over a long period of time is that employees became monotonous. Every humans
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human
needs
changes throughout their life especially in the case of Change the verb form
need
job
.Most of them believe that Correct article usage
a job
job
change will help to increase opportunities and skills because they get an
expose Correct article usage
apply
in
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to
other environment
Change the wording
another environment
other environments
also
. Experiences from different background will make an individual perfect and they can be able to survive in any condition. Consequently
they can switch from one Add a comma
,Consequently
job
title to another without much hestitation
. For instances, a candidate with more experience in various sectors from different companies Correct your spelling
hesitation
have
more Change the verb form
has
job
opportunities because they have capability
to adapt to Change the article
the capability
new
environment which is an essential strength for an employee.
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a new
the new
Lastly
, having discussed the topic at length, i
agree to some Change the capitalization
I
extend
that a Replace the word
extent
person
should stick on
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to
same
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the same
job
for life long is not a good idea. On the contrary
, they have to get exposed to other
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another job
other jobs
job
also
in order to to
increase their skills and competency.Remove the redundancy
apply
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