Some people think one should stay all their life in the same job, whereas others advocate changing jobs from time to time. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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job
is a significant stimulator to improve prosperity and well-being.
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of people believe that a
person
should remain in the same
job
in their career .
However
, some chunks of folks
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that a
job
change is essential from one period to another. The forthcoming essay will discuss both aspects prior to my
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view point
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.
Firstly
, doing the same
job
for a long period of time makes a man perfect in that task which
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to enrich his skills and knowledge in that subject. And the
person
who is employed in that
job
will get
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satisfaction in his work
also
because he is mastered in his works which
helps
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to
acheive
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achieve
their organisation task more efficiently and effectively within the time limit.
Likewise
, if a
person
is doing the same
job
for years in the same company he can create a good relationship and
a
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trust with other employees
also
thereby create a harmonious environment in that organisation.
For example
, My cousin is working in a private company
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36years , started her career as
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executive , later she was promoted
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chief
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financial officer in that department.
Although
she started in
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job
, through her connections and with trust among them she was promoted to
new
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the new
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job
title.
However
, negative impacts
also
exist and the major pitfall associated with
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the same
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job
over a long period of time is that employees became monotonous. Every
humans
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needs
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changes throughout their life especially in the case of
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.Most of them believe that
job
change will help to increase opportunities and skills because they get
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expose
in
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other environment
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another environment
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also
. Experiences from different background will make an individual perfect and they can be able to survive in any condition.
Consequently
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they can switch from one
job
title to another without much
hestitation
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hesitation
. For instances, a candidate with more experience in various sectors from different companies
have
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more
job
opportunities because they have
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to adapt to
new
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a new
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environment which is an essential strength for an employee.
Lastly
, having discussed the topic at length,
i
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agree to some
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that a
person
should stick
on
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to
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same
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the same
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job
for life long is not a good idea.
On the contrary
, they have to get exposed to
other
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another job
other jobs
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job
also
in order to
to
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increase their skills and competency.
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  • job security
  • stability
  • financial insecurity
  • expertise
  • advance their careers
  • promotions
  • pay raises
  • recognition
  • personal and professional growth
  • work environments
  • responsibilities
  • skill set
  • adaptability
  • job satisfaction
  • mental health
  • stuck
  • stagnant
  • lucrative
  • job offers
  • commitment
  • instability
  • retirement plans
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