You brought some dog food from a store, and it turned out to be the expired one. Write a letter to the store manager about this.

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Dear Manager, I am writing

this

letter to express my frustration as I have received an expired product from your stock.

Last

week, I

had

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purchased "Drools" dog food for my dog, and seems like it

was

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has

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expired. The food bag has crossed the date of expiration and I did not realise until after I bought it and had a look at it today. I usually check expiration dates, but as your

store

was a well-known stock, I trusted you and didn’t check

this

time.

However

, your

store

has broken my trust. As a consumer, I have the right to go to the consumer court and file a complaint against your

store

, which may lead to the entire

store

inspection or warnings. My receipt has been attached to

this

email. I am expecting compensation for the inconvenience that I have suffered and a written promise that

such

things

would

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never happen again. Yours Faithfully, Annie

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task response

Ensure that the letter clearly addresses the issue of receiving an expired product and the requested resolution. Include specific details regarding the purchase and expiration date.

coherence cohesion

Ensure a clear introduction, body, and conclusion with appropriate transitions for better coherence and cohesion. Use formal language for greeting and closing.

lexical resource

Use a wider range of vocabulary and expressions to communicate the issue more effectively. Try to avoid repetition of words and phrases.

grammatical range

Pay attention to sentence structure, subject-verb agreement, and the use of prepositions to improve grammatical range.

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

155 words

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