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Children nowadays spend a great deal of time watching television. However,television cannot replace the book as a learning tool which is why children are less well educated today .to what extent do you agree with that statement

#children #time #television #book #tool
Nowadays,
Children
 are not much interested in getting
proper
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education
. I agree
to
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 the point that it is due to the fact that they are busy spending a great deal of time watching the
television
.
However
, It is not always true.
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television
 can be useful for educating
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children
childrens
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children
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 if used properly.
Education
 is
extremly
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extremely
 important for any child for their growth. But,
in
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 their age, they don't understand the
important
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importance
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 of taking proper
education
. Kids are usually fond of watching cartoons or movies on
television
 for entertainment. They end up spending very
less
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 time reading
books
 or doing their homework.
However
,
Books
 written by subject experts are a great source of learning.
Children
 can read
books
 anytime they want. Non-
education
 purpose
books
 are
also
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an incredible
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 tool for learning
import
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 life
lessions
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lessons
.
Books
 can be read from anywhere without the need
of
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for
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 anything special.
This
 proves that
children
 should read more
books
 so that they don't end up being less educated.
However
,
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television
 can
sometime
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 be used as a tool to deliver
education
 to
children
. As we all know that kids like sitting in front of
television
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the television
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 a lot so if we show them educational videos on it
then
 they will surely like learning that way.
For instance
, The state government of
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 has started few educational channels
in
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Television
 and it has helped kids to take interest in learning. In conclusion,
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television
 can not
completly
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completely
 replace the book as
medium
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a medium
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 to educate
children
 but it can very well be a supporting tool if used wisely. It is important that we take advantages of the
television
 to make
children
 more interested in learning.
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