The education you receive from your family is more important than the education you receive from school. To what extent do you agree with this statement and why?
To live in a society a person should have
knowledge
of traditions, moral values and so on. Many people believe that education receive from parents
is most important as compared to other sources such
as school
. I believe that school
gives subjective knowledge
whereas parents
teach us moral and traditional knowledge
. This
essay will elaborate on my views in the forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin
with, education from school
is very subjective and deep. It helps students to grab jobs in a particular field. Parents
do not know the way of teaching subjects
. For instance
, grade 6th student has 9 subjects
and parents
can expert in one or two subjects
. They can teach only those subjects
. So, subjective knowledge
helps them to secure their future.
On the other hand
, parents
give moral and traditional knowledge
which one cannot find anywhere. To live in a society it is necessary to have knowledge
about the traditions, customs, and so on. Parents
also
give their experience. For instance
, if someone's father is an artist. He can take some tips from their parents
. Parents
want to make their infant a good civilization.
To conclude, In my opinion, both have their own importance in the children life. In school
, pupils learn the subjective language and from parents
, they learn moral, customs and traditional values which cannot gain from the outside world.Submitted by Rajwinder Kaur on
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