Some people think that we can not learn anything from the past for our life today, while others believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand human life. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Nowadays the discussion regarding whether historical heritages are useful in terms of one country's development has sparked off an intense debate. In my honest

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opinion

history

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potential contribution to the country,

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, whether

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history

is useful is always subjective and open to be debated. On the one hand , it is undebatable that the prosperity for most of the nations

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from its historical spirits.

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is because

history

itself, by definition, is the failure and the trial of the entire humanity,

therefore

since lots of mistakes that

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made by our ancestor was recorded along with the devastating consequences of various kinds of failures.

Then

the

history

may act as a kind of guide for

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future development that

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the nation to avoid the same kinds of mistakes that the ancient people has already taken.

On the other hand

, it is

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arguable that certain people regard

history

as literately nothing but a good source of

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significance when applies to practical uses like economic and social development. These people always defence themself by providing some irrelevant information like the fact that the USA is built on the ground where it is only inhabited or civilized for only 200 plus years. The fatal defect for

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is the fact that it may

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or lists certain fancy facts and data.

However

, they just suggested that

history

is not a necessity for a country's prosperity. To sum up the above-mentioned statements, it is crucially important to

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fully

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awareness about the contribution of

history

even though it may not be useful for all kinds of circumstances.

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Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Plastic bags, plastic bottles, plastic packaging are bad for the environment. what damade does plastic do to the environment? what can be done by governments and individuals to solve this problem?

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.