some people like to spend their liesure time after work with their coworkers while others like to keep their private life separate from work. Discuss both sides.

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the
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or not, which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many
people
claiming it is beneficial, while others reject
this
notion. The substantial influence of
this
trend has many sparked controversies over the potential impact in recent years. In
this
essay, we will discuss
both
the
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views before
comming
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to any conclusion.
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, there are
myraid
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reasons which will
further
explain why sharing free
time
with colleges is beneficial but the
predominent
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one stems from the fact, that it makes our life easier at the workplace. To vindicate,
people
who belong to small towns
,
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generally
moves
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to cities for their respective jobs and whenever they get some
time
off from their workplace they prefer to
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hangout
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with colleges because they know each other better than anyone else in that foreign city.
Moreover
, it is advantageous for their job, as they get more
time
to impress and help their managers.
However
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work related
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stress and
job related
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thoughts will always be there in your mind which can be stressful at times.
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,
on the other
hand
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many
people
prefer to
spent
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their leisure
time
privately. It can be with family members, relatives or friends or with anyone. They prefer to keep
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and private life
seperatly
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. Apparently, many employees claim to attain peace of mind when they leave all the pending
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issues and tensions in the office whenever they step out of their company. They do not wish to take any burden at home.
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who
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use
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to be a very strict teacher in the school and every student was scared of him but at home
is
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was the
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funniest guy one can ever think of. The reason why a lions share of the
people
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to keep
both
the
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things
seperate
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because they wish to give complete attention to
both
. I firmly believe
this
is the best way to manage your
work
and personal life. To conclude, having dwelled with the
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like getting proper guidance to perform well at
work
by getting along with office friends, I firmly agree that benefits of enjoying the best of
both
worlds
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by
carring
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a
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introvert attitude.
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