Some People Believe That University Students Should Pay All The Cost of Studies Because University Education Only Benefits The Students Themselves

In

this

day and age, more and more contemporary attention has been placed on the opinion that undergraduates and postgraduates ought to pay all their studies expenses since tertiary

education

is beneficial to sole individuals but not the

society

as a whole. From my perspective, I do not subscribe to

this

school of thought.

To begin

with, it is necessary for universities to give scholarships to meritorious students

instead

of asking them to pay all the costs of their studies. Undoubtedly, attracting the most talented students is one of the top priorities of any

university

in the world because those ones may make many valuable contributions and in the long term, build up a reputation for a

university

if they are appreciated.

In addition

, due to the underprivileged background, lots of students with excellent academic performance and other great capabilities may not have a chance to receive territory

education

and

this

is definitely a waste of talents, who may become prominent citizens in the future.

Therefore

, awarding scholarships

in

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this

case is completely deserving. I strongly believe that

university

education

may result in huge advantages for both individual and

society

.

For example

, if a deserving student can receive scholarships from a medical school, he or she might become an excellent doctor after graduation, having the ability to save thousands of people’s lives.

Besides

that, financially supported territory

university

will incentivize more and more adolescents to attend universities, leading to a higher number of educated workforces and

this

will contribute to developing a more civilized

society

. In conclusion, with all the reasons mentioned above, undergraduates and postgraduates should be supported financially, especially for talented ones because

university

education

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advantageous to both individuals and

society

.