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some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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while some individuals are of the opinion that travelling to other communities and better job opportunities in foreign nations are the only logic that
people
 tend to be multilingual, others believe that learners of foreign
languages
 consider other options when they decide to learn
languages
besides
 their mother tongue. I agree with the
second
 opinion. learning other
languages
 gives us a hand to have a better journey in foreign
countries
. when it comes to communicational issues.
People
 who are familiar with the language of the residents of host
countries
 , they are less face fewer problems
such
 as losing their address.
Moreover
, as far as business is concerned, Speaking the language of other society gives international businessmen a hand to better interact with their colleagues in other community. It decreases misunderstanding and improves the quality of our work.
Although
 I agree with the argument above, from my perspective, there are other reasons as well.some
languages
 are very popular and there are a large number of
people
 who are able to speak these
languages
.
As a result
, learning these
languages
 may contribute to having access to a variety of data and articles from other nation's researchers and may improve our creativity and critical thinking.
Furthermore
, multilingual
people
 play an important role in promoting their society`s tourist economy .They are more able to make a connection with tourists and talk about their
countries
 attractions which are more satisfying for visitors. All in all, from my ,perspective having more enjoyable trips and finding a better job in other
countries
 and other reasons which are explained in the
second
 paragraph seems to be the reasons that individuals try to learn other
languages
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • multilingual
  • linguistic proficiency
  • globalized world
  • cross-cultural communication
  • immersive experience
  • adaptability
  • cultural exchange
  • interpersonal skills
  • employment prospects
  • empathy
  • intellectual development
  • overcome language barriers
  • global market
  • resourceful
  • life-changing
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