It is generally believed that some people are born with certain telents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sport person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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It is considered that
beeing
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being
talented in different areas of life depends on genes, while others believe that it is possible to learn everything and it
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not matter any inheritance. I strongly believe that via learning and strong
motivation
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person
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a person
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can achieve everything. On the one hand, there is no doubt that roots play a role in having
talent
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, and it is easy to say that somebody achieved something because of his/her innate
talent
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.
Although
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it is not a secret that
people
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believe in
this
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theory as they do not want to achieve something or improve
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themselves
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.
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, the son of any popular actor is considered as
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best actor because of his root, because he inherited
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his fathers'
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talent
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.
On the other hand
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, it is understood that some
people
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spend a lot of time for improvement themselves.
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, strong
motivation
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plays a huge role in
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process,
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they live
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comfort zone to accomplish their future. It is clear as daylight that individuals usually try to find any excuse in order to do nothing regarding
self improvement
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self-improvement
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, there are so many
people
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who achieved a great wealth life without any support and inheritance, regardless
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fact that they have
a talented roots
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talented roots
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.
In addition
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, there are many
people
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who
also
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do not have
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money or
oportunities
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opportunities
for
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study at university
finally
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fullfil
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fulfil
their huge dreams because of their
motivation
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and ambition. To sum up, there is
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two sides
of
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one coin,
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surely
it is easy to think that
talent
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is
inherited
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an inherited
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thing,
however
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in order to superior something needs
enourmous
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enormous
motivation
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and aspiration.
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