It is generally believed that some people are born with certain telents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sport person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is considered that
beeing
talented in different areas of life depends on genes, while others believe that it is possible to learn everything and it Correct your spelling
being
is does
not matter any inheritance. I strongly believe that via learning and strong Change the verb form
does
motivation
person
can achieve everything.
On the one hand, there is no doubt that roots play a role in having Add an article
a person
talent
, and it is easy to say that somebody achieved something because of his/her innate talent
. Although
it is not a secret that people
believe in this
theory as they do not want to achieve something or improve ourselves
. Correct pronoun usage
themselves
For instance
, the son of any popular actor is considered as a
best actor because of his root, because he inherited Change the article
the
fathers'
Correct pronoun usage
his fathers'
talent
.
On the other hand
, it is understood that some people
spend a lot of time for improvement themselves. Furthermore
, strong motivation
plays a huge role in this
process, actually
they live Add a comma
,actually
their
comfort zone to accomplish their future. It is clear as daylight that individuals usually try to find any excuse in order to do nothing regarding Change preposition
in their
self improvement
. Add a hyphen
self-improvement
For example
, there are so many people
who achieved a great wealth life without any support and inheritance, regardless the
fact that they have Change preposition
of the
a talented roots
. Correct the article-noun agreement
talented roots
a talented root
In addition
, there are many people
who also
do not have a
money or Remove the article
apply
oportunities
Correct your spelling
opportunities
for
study at university Change preposition
to
finally
fullfil
their huge dreams because of their Correct your spelling
fulfil
motivation
and ambition.
To sum up, there is a
two sides Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
of
one coin, Change preposition
to
surelly
it is easy to think that Correct your spelling
surely
talent
is inherited
thing, Correct article usage
an inherited
however
in order to superior something needs enourmous
Correct your spelling
enormous
motivation
and aspiration.Submitted by zarifa.radjabova on
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