Smacking children is the best form of discipline. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Raise children is not easy, they push us to some limits where we don'
t
know what to do with them. In the past giving physical punishment to your
kid
was one
way
to teach them. In
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we will discuss why
this
is not acceptable. People have written rivers of ink about how to educate children and
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issue looks that it won'
t
be solved for a long time or at least not everybody will agree. In my opinion, the problem when you have to deal with a
kid
is that every
kid
is different
this
means that maybe some
kid
reacts better than others to some type of punishment.
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some parents decide to not attend
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child when they start crying, it may work with some kids but for others won´
t
. So when we talk about smacking could be an option some people will agree with
this
but the problem is,
this
is already proved, kids that have been punished by
this
way
usually displays feelings against their parents.
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from
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, there are a lot of examples that the parents cross the red line and what
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was supposed to be a punishment is physical abuse. So just in
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something like
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could happen is better to choose other ways of teaching.
On the other hand
, dealing with a toddler is difficult, more than difficult, they won'
t
listen or try to behave because you are telling them. They work under very basic emotions and it is possible that the only
way
is by slapping them.
For example
, if you are in a restaurant and your son doesn'
t
stop doing something wrong a slap o the face can be the only
way
to make him stop. I am of the opinion that there is always another option to teach
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how they have to behave. I have a niece of 4 years old and I have never
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her or even yell at her but
also
when she does something wrong I talk with her and even if I am tired I will try to make her listen to me. For the record sometimes takes more than five minutes.
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