Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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Some individuals think that

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eco system

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has changed due to

loss

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the loss

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of few species of plants and creatures.

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essay will discuss

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scenario, by considering the opinions from both sides by using examples of Oxford University research and Time Magazine survey to

demotrate

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demonstrate

both points and support the claims. On one hand, some mankind

think

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this

environment

is changing due to

loss

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the loss

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of creatures like

Rihnos

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Rhinos

These kind

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of animal

loss

will impact one sort of

environment

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environmental

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loss

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, Oxford University has conducted

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apply

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research in 2018 on adults among these adults

morethan

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more than

80% has clearly told they support

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statment

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statement

. So, from

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example

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it is clear that most of the folks agree

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this

theory.

On the other hand

, some people

contradicts

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this

statement, in

there

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their

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point of view in

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world so many new species takes birth and at the same way deaths

also

happen but

environment

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environmental

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change is not happening because of

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, it is mainly due to human beings. They try to control

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world, they invent new technologies and make

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environment

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pollution hub for the universe.

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, a survey in 2019 by Time Magazine indicates that people think

this

cliamte

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climate

change is due

several

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vehicles and industries. Nearly 90% of people accept it is because of technology created by us. So,

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this

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we can come to one opinion that

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climate

changes not because of

loss

of particular species

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animals. To sum up, in my point of view, I strongly say that it is due to human has evolved to great extent in dominating

this

world, to make more powerful they invented new technologies to feel better. But now

that is

changing

this

environment

Finally

, I recommend the new generation to invent new technology which will enhance the climate.

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Topic Vocabulary:

biodiversity
extinction
habitat loss
ecosystem
food chain
imbalance
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climate change
pollution
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