Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.

Some individuals think that
this
eco system
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has changed due to the
loss
of few species of plants and creatures.
This
essay will discuss
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scenario, by considering the opinions from both sides by using examples of Oxford University research and Time Magazine survey to demonstrate both points and support the claims. On one hand, some mankind thinks,
this
environment
is changing due to the
loss
of creatures like
Rihnos
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Rhinos
.
These kind
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of animal
loss
will impact one sort of
environment
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loss
.
For example
, Oxford University has conducted
a
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research in 2018 on adults among these adults
morethan
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more than
80% has clearly told they support
this
statment
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statement
. So, from
this
example
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it is clear that most of the folks agree
to
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this
theory.
On the other hand
, some people
contradicts
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this
statement, in
there
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their
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point of view in
this
world so many new species takes birth and at the same way deaths
also
happen but
environment
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change is not happening because of
this
, it is mainly due to human beings. They try to control
this
world, they invent new technologies and make
this
environment
as
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a pollution hub for the universe.
For example
, a survey in 2019 by Time Magazine indicates that people think
this
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climate
change is due
several
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vehicles and industries. Nearly 90% of people accept it is because of technology created by us. So,
similarly
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by
this
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we can come to one opinion that
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climate
changes not because of
loss
of particular species
or
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of
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animals. To sum up, in my point of view, I strongly say that it is due to human has evolved to great extent in dominating
this
world, to make more powerful they invented new technologies to feel better. But now
that is
changing
this
environment
.
Finally
, I recommend the new generation to invent new technology which will enhance the climate.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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