You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You should write at least 150 words. Writing task 1

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Dear Neighbours, I have recently moved

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this

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community. My fat number is 106,

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floor, E wing, my name is Pallavi Joshi. I have received a complaint letter regarding noise coming from my apartment. At

first

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, I would like to apologize for that and I would like to explain it in

details

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. The noise is due to some renovation is going on, in my flat.

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task is must

needed

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before my family move in.

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apartment has many leakage problems as well as drainage problems which I need to fix it as soon as possible. To get rid of these problems maintenance guy needs to use

drilling

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machine for

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the wall

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which makes

loud

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noise. I extremely apologize for that. I assure you that,

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will finish as early as possible and I will try to slow down work at noon. My purpose is not to disturb the

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neighbourhood

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neighbour hood

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rather than fixing my problem. I hope you will understand my situation and allow me to continue my work. if anyone has any

concern

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about it, please feel free to contact me. Sincerely, Pallavi Joshi.

Leena KapoorFri Jun 18 2021

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

186 words

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