You are planning to go and study English at a school overseas. You would like some information about their courses. Write a letter to the school. In your letter ask about the school say what kind of accommodation you want mention any special requests you have (for example diet).

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Dear Sir / Madam My name is

Shoira

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Shira

and I am from Uzbekistan. I am writing to you because I would like to study English at your school. I learnt about your program from a newspaper and would like to have more information before the registration.

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of all, as I'm from Uzbekistan, I would like to know if you provide students with accommodation. In case if you do, I would like to stay with a host family. Because

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I believe that it would have a conducive effect on my English and social skills.

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time, during my studies in Saint Diego I stayed with a local family, and really enjoyed it.

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, I have an allergy to pets, particularly dogs.

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, I would be happy to live in a house without domestic animals. Please let me know if the school can arrange my accommodation. If not, I would be glad to know possible options. Looking forward to your response, Faithfully,

Shoira

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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8 paragraphs

162 words

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You are planning to go and study English at a school overseas. You would like some information about their courses. Write a letter to the school. In your letter ask about the school say what kind of accommodation you want mention any special requests you have (for example diet).

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