Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favor of them because of their benefits to humanity. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

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majority
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suffering from experiments so government must be banned
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that would be more
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boosting day by day but
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humans as well as there are so many species nowadays on
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environment
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chain so
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of
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more crucial nowadays .To elaborate it, advancement of technology every single day new health hazards become a big problem for
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, they have to experiments on
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to develop
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medication for any ailment .
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today's epoch that's why
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of humans
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convincing arguments and
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important but
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of new good medical products
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