Many people say that we now live in ‘consumer societies’ where money and possessions are given too much importance. Others believe that consumer culture has played a vital role in improving our lives. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Consumerism
grants Use synonyms
people
a taste of the good Use synonyms
life
. Obviously, it is Use synonyms
also
engaged with material possession, earning Linking Words
money
and social status in Use synonyms
the
society. Correct article usage
apply
However
, some Linking Words
people
believe that Use synonyms
consumer
culture might bring Use synonyms
vital
role in order to Correct article usage
a vital
improving
lives. Change the verb
improve
Although
Linking Words
this
is true, in my Linking Words
opinion
good Add the comma(s)
,opinion
life
could not potentially affect by Use synonyms
consumer
culture.
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Firstly
, Linking Words
Consumerism
has several positives which are engaged with Use synonyms
happy
Add an article
a happy
life
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, happy Linking Words
life
which is marked as acquire prestigious items or Use synonyms
money
may force Use synonyms
people
to work hard Use synonyms
for
increase their earnings. Thereby, creativity and innovation are flooding in their head as a motivational drive to earn more Change preposition
to
money
. Use synonyms
For example
, the owner of Linking Words
online
shop who really wants to buy Correct article usage
an online
iPhone
uses several innovations in order to raise her sale. Correct article usage
an iPhone
Secondly
, the power of Linking Words
consumerism
Use synonyms
also
affects trading among countries and Linking Words
then
consecutively increases national domestic income. Linking Words
For example
, demanding Linking Words
of
Change preposition
for
Japan
vehicles might rise export and Replace the word
Japanese
also
encourages Linking Words
the
Correct article usage
apply
economics
condition. Replace the word
economic
Furthermore
, those explanations above mentioned that Linking Words
consumerism
is Use synonyms
stance
for Add an article
a stance
the stance
live
improving.
Replace the word
life
On the contrary
, good living is not always linear with Linking Words
consumerism
. Some Use synonyms
people
are willing to be selfish and unaware with Use synonyms
surrounds
. They may guide their behaviour to satisfy pleasure with unlimited. Replace the word
surroundings
This
act makes them Linking Words
as
Change preposition
apply
victim
of their act; certain it is followed by Add an article
a victim
the victim
unhappiness
feeling. Replace the word
unhappy
For instance
, chronic shopaholics never feel satisfied Linking Words
of
their buying Change the preposition
with
although
they already shop for doubled even tripled in a month. Linking Words
Moreover
, highly concerned about Linking Words
self
needed might causes Correct pronoun usage
what
people
less care Use synonyms
of
the Change preposition
about
environment
condition. They do not aware and think to spend their Replace the word
environmental
money
for charity or donation for humanity probably.
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Finally
, the impact, good and bad, of Linking Words
consumer
society might probably coin as Use synonyms
human
choice for their live improving. I believe that every person already Add an article
a human
the human
take
highly consideration before Change the verb form
takes
dive
into Change the verb form
diving
consumer
culture.Use synonyms
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