Many people say that we now live in ‘consumer societies’ where money and possessions are given too much importance. Others believe that consumer culture has played a vital role in improving our lives. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Consumerism
grants people
a taste of the good life
. Obviously, it is also
engaged with material possession, earning money
and social status in the
society. Correct article usage
apply
However
, some people
believe that consumer
culture might bring vital
role in order to Correct article usage
a vital
improving
lives. Change the verb
improve
Although
this
is true, in my opinion
good Add the comma(s)
,opinion
life
could not potentially affect by consumer
culture.
Firstly
, Consumerism
has several positives which are engaged with happy
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a happy
life
. Moreover
, happy life
which is marked as acquire prestigious items or money
may force people
to work hard for
increase their earnings. Thereby, creativity and innovation are flooding in their head as a motivational drive to earn more Change preposition
to
money
. For example
, the owner of online
shop who really wants to buy Correct article usage
an online
iPhone
uses several innovations in order to raise her sale. Correct article usage
an iPhone
Secondly
, the power of consumerism
also
affects trading among countries and then
consecutively increases national domestic income. For example
, demanding of
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for
Japan
vehicles might rise export and Replace the word
Japanese
also
encourages the
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economics
condition. Replace the word
economic
Furthermore
, those explanations above mentioned that consumerism
is stance
for Add an article
a stance
the stance
live
improving.
Replace the word
life
On the contrary
, good living is not always linear with consumerism
. Some people
are willing to be selfish and unaware with surrounds
. They may guide their behaviour to satisfy pleasure with unlimited. Replace the word
surroundings
This
act makes them as
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apply
victim
of their act; certain it is followed by Add an article
a victim
the victim
unhappiness
feeling. Replace the word
unhappy
For instance
, chronic shopaholics never feel satisfied of
their buying Change the preposition
with
although
they already shop for doubled even tripled in a month. Moreover
, highly concerned about self
needed might causes Correct pronoun usage
what
people
less care of
the Change preposition
about
environment
condition. They do not aware and think to spend their Replace the word
environmental
money
for charity or donation for humanity probably.
Finally
, the impact, good and bad, of consumer
society might probably coin as human
choice for their live improving. I believe that every person already Add an article
a human
the human
take
highly consideration before Change the verb form
takes
dive
into Change the verb form
diving
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