With the development of online communication, people will never be alone and will always be able to make new friends. To what extent do you agree?

I believe that even though the
internet
has made communicating easy we remain lonely and it’s getting harder to befriend
people
.
Firstly
,
this
essay will look at why we cannot
trust
and befriend everybody online and
secondly
, will explain how the
internet
has failed to connect
people
. The Crux of any relationship is
trust
, and unfortunately trusting everybody online is naïve to a fault. The anonymity afforded by the
internet
has made it all too easy for anybody to create a fictitious identity, one might argue that there are checks and balances but, these are far from being foolproof. Using image editing software a person with basic computer skills can forge almost any document. It is little wonder, our news feeds are peppered with numerous accounts of online fraud and identity theft. Almost
everyone
who has an email address will be familiar with the “Nigerian prince email”. I do not advocate that
everyone
online is committing fraud, but we cannot blindly
trust
everyone
on the World Wide Web.
On the other hand
, it is presumptuous to assume that the
internet
has reached
everyone
. Many developing countries still struggle with necessities, let alone have an uninterrupted supply of electricity. Having
internet
access is considered a luxury.
Secondly
, the majority of
people
from rural areas are not computer literate and will be unable to use the
internet
even if they have access. It would be foolhardy to assume that
everyone
is connected to the
internet
as can be seen with
people
live in rural India. In conclusion, owing to a lack of
trust
we remain sceptical of the
people
that we have met online these connections are mere acquaintances not ‘friends’, to compound matters the access to the
internet
is not universal. I
thus
entirely disagree with the statement.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • connectivity
  • geographical gaps
  • interact
  • social media platforms
  • messaging apps
  • revolutionized
  • physical distance
  • online communities
  • camaraderie
  • immediate surroundings
  • unparalleled opportunities
  • superficial relationships
  • excessive reliance
  • emotional warmth
  • tactile comfort
  • digital communication
  • digital divide
  • internet censorship
  • global connectivity
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