Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

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Discipline is an important component of any child's life. It
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them to become a good member of society and good society makes
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nation. People always argue that, whether
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should learn
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or teacher. I will explain both of the aspects in my views.
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will share my stance on
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education, school is responsible for the social development of a child. Teacher
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them learning basic
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like eating, hand
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, respecting elders , etc.
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learn how to behave in
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and how to help elders in crossing road.
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group feels that
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play a big role in teaching
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good
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parents
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spend
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of time with
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at home and they can teach them easily.
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, how to greet someone, when any visitor come to your place. I believe that both play
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role in
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social development. Many
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has special classes on teaching
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to
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. They help them in physical, emotional and social development. After school, it is the responsibility of the
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to teach them. As
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are closing watching the
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and it is said that most of the
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chidren
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children
inherit from their
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, getting up early in
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kids
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learn from their
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. I conclusion, I think that teacher
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parents
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play a great role in teaching kid
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are the pillar of
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society.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • good members of society
  • teach
  • parents
  • schools
  • responsibility
  • values
  • respect
  • empathy
  • responsibility
  • formal education
  • citizenship
  • ethics
  • social responsibility
  • lead by example
  • role models
  • conducive environment
  • extracurricular activities
  • community involvement
  • collaborate
  • holistic approach
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