In recent times, economic growth has helped many become richer, both in developed and developing countries. However, those in developed countries are not as happy as they were in the past. Why is this? What can be learned from this?
It has been suggested by some that
people
have been getting richer as the flourish of the economy not only in some developed countries but Use synonyms
also
in several developing nations, while residents living in the developed nations are getting unhappy than they were. Linking Words
This
is an appalling result of the change of lifestyle. The lesson should be gained from Linking Words
this
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money
is unable to satisfy all demands.
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First
of all, most individuals, particularly young generations, would feel they have been spending less leisure time with their family and friends, Linking Words
thus
resulting in a lack of intimacy. The reason is that after working, they Linking Words
also
need to stay back to do extra work in order to earn more Linking Words
money
sometimes. Use synonyms
Besides
, when they have spare time, they are so exhausted that they just stay alone Linking Words
instead
of interacting with others. Linking Words
As a result
, they do not have enough friends or family members to share their feelings, which contributes Linking Words
loneliness
and unhappy to them. Change preposition
to loneliness
For example
, most office-workers who are working and living in New York say that Linking Words
although
more Linking Words
money
they are able to earn nowadays through overloads work, they feel more anxious and upset than they were.
The detailed understanding of Use synonyms
this
dreadful situation is that Linking Words
money
is not powerful. Everyone should enjoy their life by communicating with each other to satisfy their emotional and mental needs while working hard to follow the rapid developing speed, Use synonyms
otherwise
, individuals will be depressed. As an illustration, some successful Linking Words
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businessman
point
out that previously they paid their all energies and time into working to earn more Change the verb form
points
money
. Use synonyms
However
, when their dreams have been come true, they did not have Linking Words
motivation
and feel satisfaction as nobody can share their happiness, which causes their emotion Add an article
the motivation
is
empty.
In conclusion, Change the verb form
to be
although
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people
may vary in their opinions about the reason why Use synonyms
people
are getting unhappy despite the fact that they have more Use synonyms
money
. I think that the different lifestyle is the main reason, and Use synonyms
people
should adjust their opinions about earning Use synonyms
money
and enjoying life to suit Use synonyms
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