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and
women
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are different in terms of their characteristics and abilities. For
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reason, some jobs are better done by
men
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and others by
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. Do you agree or disagree? It is true that
men
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and
women
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have different characteristics and abilities and
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stigmatized that they have different occupation segregation. Though
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and
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have different
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and perform differently
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I believe that both sexes can perform the same
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in
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capacity and bring the same outcome. In
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gender
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differences
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which
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creates different
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roles.
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are considered best suited for caring jobs
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offers in reception and advertising roles in various beauty products considering
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are more beautiful and should be given feminine roles in
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market.
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, these are only the
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stereotype and should be eradicated from
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society.
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are
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carrying out
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high level
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decision making role in various organizations like
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are
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in
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, army and in
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field which
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dominant
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by
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the male
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.
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are
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contributing their role in public space.
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more
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are in politics and raising their voice for
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equality.
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,
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are equally representing in the political space and working with the
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together.
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, the president of Nepal is a female and so with the other countries like Finland and Bangladesh. In conclusion, though male and
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have different nature and different way of performing
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work
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work
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, I disagree that
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and
women
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should have
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separation. When
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are
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given the opportunity and capacity development, they can
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do their
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perfectly in the
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domain of
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.
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, we should not differentiate the
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on the basis of sex.
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