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In some countries, more and more people becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are reasons for this? How can people research this?

#countries #people #history #house #research
Nowadays,
number
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a number
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 of
people
 try to find out information regarding the
appartments
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apartments
 where they live. There are many reasons
of
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for
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this
 issue,
however
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 it helps
people
 to find possible weaknesses of their houses.
First
 of all, it could be different reasons why
people
 interested in
house'
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the house'
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 history.
Initially
, how
this
 building was constructed, which materials were used. The knowledge regarding the used constructions could be
usefull
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useful
 for
further
 renovation home' details,
such
 as doors or windows.
Moreover
,
this
 kind of data might help to make some changes
such
 as updating
house'
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the house'
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 plan,
for instance
, new walls or new floor.
Therefore
 it is
usefull
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useful
 for
further
 planning of heating or cooling systems of
this
 building,
however
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this
 data could prevent any
distructions
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distractions
 due to weather conditions, as wind,
typhon
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Typhon
typhoon
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 or rains. There are many different types of devices
can
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that can
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 help to do great research about
home's
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a home's
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 history,
such
 as using online maps, where
people
 can
chose
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choose
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 the location of
this
 place and discover data about
this
 building.
For
instance
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,instance
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 it is possible to find what was located in that place 100 years ago and how that street was called.
In addition
, there is a way to look for the online archive
in
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on
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internet
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the internet
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 in order to obtain old pictures of
this
 location. If it
ias
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is
 a huge interest, it is
also
 appropriate to do
archeological
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archaeological
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 research via special equipment,
such
 as
mycroscops
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microscopes
, DNA
alalyses
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analyses
analysis
 and so on. In conclusion, the history of
building
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the building
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 where
people
 live is very important and could be
usefull
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useful
 in various situations
such
 as adding changes or being aware
about
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of
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advantages
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the advantages
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 and disadvantages of
these kind
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this kind
these kinds
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 of buildings.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Historical research
  • Genealogy
  • Architectural styles
  • Heritage
  • Relics
  • Oral history
  • Archival records
  • Museum exhibits
  • Historical societies
  • House tours
  • Renovation projects
  • Original blueprints
  • Careful documentation
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