Scientists and the news media are presenting ever more evidence of climate change. Governments cannot be expected to solve this problem. It is the responsibility of individuals to change their lifestyle to prevent further damage. What are your views?

At present, any information cannot be hidden from society. On social media and news media are showing the evidence of

climate

change by scientists. In fact, they said in a few years we have to face more consequences of

climate

variation. The

government

cannot do anything to prevent

this

problem

. I think that it is not the responsibility of individuals to do in

this

problem

but take some serious steps to resolve

this

problem

.

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with ,

first

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we have to find out why

this

global warming raise every year. There are several factors but one of them is industrial and automobile pollution. Every individual has their own mindset.

Besides

this

, the

government

should take some serious action to decline the

use

of industries.

For instance

, a few years back, in

UN

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the UN

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meeting, the officials decided to decrease the

use

of factories because it creates a lot of pollution

then

every country should fall few percentages of

it

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usage

however

some major

countries

have an issue with

this

and they neglect.

Then

it is the

government

duty to protect our environment in

this

case individual cannot do anything if an official could not decline the

use

of production from their factories.

Furthermore

, every

government

wants power and money to show themself superior over the other

countries

. If one country does something

then

other

countries

do the same thing and

then

this

creates more global warming and

climate

crisis

such

as

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the usage

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of

plastic

bags. Many claims to ban

plastic

but no one does

this

.

For example

, in India, the

government

banned

plastic

and tell people do not

to

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apply

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use

the

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apply

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plastic

bag but do not shut the companies that made and sold

plastic

material. If the

government

strictly take action to stop

then

the stop factories. To conclude,

climate

change is a major

problem

for everyone. It is not solved on an individual but the

government

from all

countries

take some serious steps and methods to control

this

,

Otherwise

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we are going doomed ourselves.