Scientists and the news media are presenting ever more evidence of climate change. Governments cannot be expected to solve this problem. It is the responsibility of individuals to change their lifestyle to prevent further damage. What are your views?

At present, any information cannot be hidden from society. On social media and news media are showing the evidence of
climate
change by scientists. In fact, they said in a few years we have to face more consequences of
climate
variation. The
government
cannot do anything to prevent
this
problem
. I think that it is not the responsibility of individuals to do in
this
problem
but take some serious steps to resolve
this
problem
.
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with ,
first
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we have to find out why
this
global warming raise every year. There are several factors but one of them is industrial and automobile pollution. Every individual has their own mindset.
Besides
this
, the
government
should take some serious action to decline the
use
of industries.
For instance
, a few years back, in
UN
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the UN

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meeting, the officials decided to decrease the
use
of factories because it creates a lot of pollution
then
every country should fall few percentages of
it
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usage
however
some major
countries
have an issue with
this
and they neglect.
Then
it is the
government
duty to protect our environment in
this
case individual cannot do anything if an official could not decline the
use
of production from their factories.
Furthermore
, every
government
wants power and money to show themself superior over the other
countries
. If one country does something
then
other
countries
do the same thing and
then
this
creates more global warming and
climate
crisis
such
as
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of
plastic
bags. Many claims to ban
plastic
but no one does
this
.
For example
, in India, the
government
banned
plastic
and tell people do not
to
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use
the
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plastic
bag but do not shut the companies that made and sold
plastic
material. If the
government
strictly take action to stop
then
the stop factories. To conclude,
climate
change is a major
problem
for everyone. It is not solved on an individual but the
government
from all
countries
take some serious steps and methods to control
this
,
Otherwise
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we are going doomed ourselves.
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