Some people think educated people more valuable than people who learned skills through experience. Do you think educated people are most valuable for society? What kind of skill can people learn through experience that can benefit society?

Some individuals believe that

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graduates are more essential to the community than non-degree holders. In my opinion, accomplished individuals are important

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but not as important as experienced workers. Recently, a lot of companies and firms succeeded by relying on

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with skills and experiences that they learned

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their own or from others, and there are many skills that

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to

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society,

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as developers and mechanics. In the past years, traditional industries were

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on

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graduates because the type of products and

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required highly educated

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who had the scientific knowledge to accomplish. While nowadays, with the huge

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in

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and

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,

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companies became major players in the economy of nations, by developing apps and hardware that made our lives easier. If we look into their main workforce, we see that majority of it are software developers, who learned by

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or training

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and not by receiving a degree from

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. To cope with

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, some

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giants

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not require

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degree for

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.

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years ago that they will not be looking for only educated

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, but they will

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hire non-

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people. There

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many skills that people can learn with

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and without the need to go to school or

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. Those people with

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experiences contribute majorly to the community, without them,

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will notice a difference in life.

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, car mechanics and software developers. To conclude,

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educated

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are important to their countries, non-educated

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experienced

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are becoming more important these days due to the huge demand on them in these days.