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People believe that being literate in English allows you to acquire better jobs and thus allows one to have access to a better standard of living. Up to what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

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Introduction
It is widely agreed that being fluent in
English
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 leads to better employment opportunities. I strongly believe that apart from
language
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 expertise there are factors like skills and experience which need to be considered for a successful
carrier
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. In non-native
English
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 speaking countries even though people do not know
English
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 they flourish in their
carrier
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.
Body paragraph 1
To begin
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 with, these subject-specific skills like
knowledge
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 of the
English
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language
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 is useful for communication but for effective execution of work ,subject-specific skills are required.
For example
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, a cricketer, doctor or artist may not know
English
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 but can flawlessly execute their task without
knowledge
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 of
English
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 specific
language
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.
In addition
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 to
this
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, their expert
knowledge
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 of the subject can help them to demonstrate excellence in their field.
Body paragraph 2
Furthermore
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, there are attributes
such
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 as dedication, experience, determination and the right attitude towards work that lead an individual to a successful
carrier
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.
For instance
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, a person who is cooking is highly experienced will be in a far better position while solving the problem relating to cooking rather than a person who has
knowledge
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 of the
English
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language
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 but does not have experience of cooking.
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, with the above-mentioned ,attributes a person not only achieves the goals of his life but
also
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 demonstrates success in his
carrier
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.
Conclusion
In conclusion, It is clear that for native
English
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 speaking countries it may be important to display excellence in the
language
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 for job prospects but for non-native
English
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 speaking ,countries
English
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 is only a medium of communication and communication can be undertaken with any
language
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 which not necessarily advocates the use of
English
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.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • literate in English
  • global job opportunities
  • multinational companies
  • working language
  • educational opportunities
  • higher qualifications
  • job prospects
  • industries
  • technology, finance, healthcare
  • key skill
  • higher-paying jobs
  • proficiency
  • standard of living
  • facilitate immigration
  • remote working opportunities
  • income stability
  • non-English-speaking countries
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