Many people join distance-learning programs (study material, post, TV, Internet) and study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the same benefit as attending colleges or universities does. Do you agree or disagree?

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In the contemporary era, there are available online

classes

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in colleges, universities or schools. some public believe that

students

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can't learn easily in online

classes

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as well as they will face many problems. I slightly see eye to eye to the given statement and will my present view to the upcoming paragraph. In order to justify my point of view, I would like to pen down that, there are huge benefits of online

classes

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and some disadvantages.

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nawadays

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nowadays

, people are

very

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busy lifestyle even

students

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also

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busy in

their

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. personal work. If online

classes

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will be available in

education

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the education

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center

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then

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they can save their time.

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, one

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of my

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friend is living in

village

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the village

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, it's

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far from school. He can not

come

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everyday school. it's tremoundsly hard to him. If online

classes

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will provide a school

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it will easy for him.

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, in online

classes

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students

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can ask frequently question

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apply

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teacher

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the teacher

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student

feel

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hsitate

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hesitate

classroom

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the classroom

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because they do not want any question in

classroom

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the classroom

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apply

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nowadays, there are many

students

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who like using

computer

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a computer

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, so they can show their

intrest

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interest

in their study. The

intrest

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interest

is one of the

most good

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effecton

study

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. on

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, there is a famous dictum " one man's trash is

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another man's treasure"

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, some people think that online

classes

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not

best

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idea for

students

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because they can't mentally or physically present in class.

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, teachers

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can't teach properly to them. In nutshell, it can be said that as "every coin has two sides" in the same way

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topic has both aspects having individual value and neither of them can be said wrong but still, my point of view is more significant for me.

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2
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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7 paragraphs

292 words

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Many people join distance-learning programs (study material, post, TV, Internet) and study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the same benefit as attending colleges or universities does. Do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

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