Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest of our lives, while others believe that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
I believe every teenager at least once in life heard from an adult that "the school years are the best period of your lifetime, so enjoy it while you can", but I am confident it is not entirely true and adulthood brings more joy. There is no doubt that childhood is associated with carelessness and almost constant fun. At
this
Linking Words
time you don't have a lot of responsibilities, except visiting a school and some household help, so all your leisure time you are looking for entertainment, playing with friends, exploring the world, learning something new.
However
Linking Words
, at the same time, young persons don't have enough control over their lives. Until adolescents come of age they must obey their parents because they are not grown enough in terms of laws and their well-being depends on their parents. In
this
Linking Words
way despite all positive aspects teenagers, restricted by parents and laws, can't fully enjoy being. In spite of fact that adult years come together with
such
Linking Words
responsibilities as work, making money, taking care of family, and health, only a grown-up person feels more conscious happiness. Being an adult opens new opportunities and brings new colours to your life,
for instance
Linking Words
, the enjoinment of travelling, relationships, parenthood, the satisfaction of self-realization at work. In general mature people tend to appreciate small moments of joy, which are the most valuable moments. To sum up, every life's period has its own advantages and disadvantages. As for me, I would always choose to take responsibility for my destiny and fill it with pleasure over carelessness and unconscious enjoyment of the teen years.
Submitted by 3gubmail on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: