Some people believe that children can learn effectively by watching TV and they should be encouraged to watch TV both at home and at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, watching televisions (especially informative televisions) has been recognized as an effective method of learning, because audio-visual information can attract students’ attention and engage their interest.
Although
television programmes have educational value, I do not agree that increasing screen
time
is a good idea. Undoubtedly, it is understandable that some people are willing to encourage their
children
to watch
TV
at many different places mainly because televisions have exposed the
children
to a world of knowledge. There are many educational programmes aimed at
children
, allowing them to gain an insight into different subjects.
For example
, a wide range of documentaries can not only help people learn about historical events but
also
get a deeper understanding of various wild animals, which language channels can help them improve their foreign language skills.
This
knowledge can complement what they learn at school.
Nevertheless
, watching
TV
for a long
time
every day will lead to series of problems, one which is that television viewing can interfere with
children
’ studies and other activities which can benefit these
children
’s development.
Children
can get distracted easily, especially when they watch
TV
without adults’ supervision. Students who watch television frequently may not be able to concentrate on learning tasks, a problem that can result in poor grades. It is
also
difficult for
children
to attend those interactive activities which promote brain development
such
as reading, singing and communication.
In addition
, long screen
time
can have an adverse impact on
children
’s social development. They will sit in front of the
TV
for many hours,
instead
of playing games with their peers and communications with teachers, which increases a sense of separation between them and their friends and tutors so that they will become unsociable and unwilling to express their views and understand the thoughts of other people. Without, good communication skills, they will have difficulty in gaining knowledge, drawing upon the ideas of classmates or teachers, and achieving academic success. To summarize, even though watching
TV
can provide
children
with access to extensive information, parents should not extend their
children
TV
viewing
time
without any restriction.
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