You are looking for a part-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter: - introduce yourself - explain what sort of job you would like - say what experience and skills you have

Dear sir I am writing

this

letter to express my interest to register myself with your employment agency. I have seen an advertisement for your employment agency in the daily newspaper. I am doing a bachelor degree in hotel management from Williston college. I am an international student and my home country is India. I will stay here for the

couple of years. To support my education cost and accommodation I am looking for any kind of job close to my apartment. I have one year of experience as a waitress in a restaurant and six-month of experience as a computer operator in a grocery store. I

also

attached my curriculum vitae along with

this

letter. I can do any kind of work. I am available at 3:30 on weekdays and full days on weekends. I hope you will consider my letter. I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon. Yours sincerely Hina

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

156 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You are looking for a part-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter: - introduce yourself - explain what sort of job you would like - say what experience and skills you have

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Today people are travelling more than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the traveller?

Many people beleive that high sugar levels cause more health problems. make it more expensive to reduce the health issues. do you agree or disagree ?

Some people think advertisements may have positive economic effects whereas others think there are negative social effects because individuals are not satisfied with who they are and what they have. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

These days, mobile phones and the internet are very important to the ways in which people relate to one another socially. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?