Some people think that strict punishments for driving offenses are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

With the world growing at a fast rate and the

increase

in

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population

having a subtle impact on the gradual

increase

in

traffic

, it is notable that the number of

traffic

accidents

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has been increasing concurrently. While some people are of the

opinion

that stringent punishments are needed to reduce

traffic

accidents

,

conversely

, others believe that other measures will have a more profound impact on improving

road

safety

. In my

opinion

, while the action to be taken for each accident is subjective, stricter

laws

would be more beneficial;

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discussion will be done in the ensuing paragraphs. The

first

opinion

, that stricter punishments would be key to reducing

accidents

, definitely seems to be more fruitful. Considering the two main factors of

traffic

population

and the speed of vehicles on

road

, it only seems rational to implement

such

laws

. Notably, despite the existing

traffic

regulations in place, there has been little improvement in

road

safety

. In London,

for instance

, the rate of

accidents

has only declined over the years, compared to India, where the number of

accidents

is unimaginable. Partially,

however

,

this

may be due to the difference in

population

, yet,

laws

and their implementation play a vital part.

Furthermore

, the

second

opinion

, that other measures would

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a better impact on

traffic

reduction, does seem to be a sufficient argument. The two most important measures to reduce

traffic

are health and

safety

education and

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in fine.

Traffic

education will benefit

road

safety

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the long run, as

this

would be a stagnant process; educating a big

population

would not be easy.

Secondly

, increasing the fine may only be a temporary solution, as it is evident that increasing

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has only led to a rise in corruption. Many cases have been observed, in which people have escaped from the law. Summing up overall,

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rise in

traffic

and present

laws

are evidently the main causes for the steady

increase

in

accidents

. As the present

laws

do not seem to be sufficient, it is bound to lead to health and

safety

issues on the

road

.

Hence

, changes in

laws

, making them harsher will be

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solution for a positive outcome.