Some people think that only staff who have worked in a company for a long time should be promoted to a higher position. What is your opinion?

All individuals that start at a

job

, aspire to improve their working conditions and get promoted at some point in their career. Some persons argue that promotion should be considered only for those employees that have been in a company for a long time. I do believe that all long-term and new workers should be considered for higher positions.

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essay will discuss why

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professional

caapbility

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capability

and

comitments

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commitments

are important and can be found

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external persons.

Firstly

, we are aware that there are highly trained and capable

professionists

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professionals

in almost every

enterpise

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enterprise

around the world.

For instance

, for vacant positions at big companies,

such

as Coca Cola and Google, head hunters are hired to identify someone that can

fulfill

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the requirements of the

job

. A new person can bring all his knowledge and enthusiasm to a company and help on

achiving

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achieving

group goals and increasing their profits.

Therefore

, considering

also

external individual when offering a

position

can bring

benefitst

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benefits

benefit

to a company.

Secondly

, staying at a

job

for

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long term is not a synonym of commitment and loyalty towards the employer.

For example

, not all workers are satisfied and happy at their

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workplace

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work place

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,

however

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they need that

job

to cover their daily living expenses. A feeling of belonging in an individual

that is

motivated by a new project or

position

can be higher.

Thus

, cooperation and compromise can be expected from both recent and previous employees.  In conclusion, for a

job

position

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a competent and

commited

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committed

professionist

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professional

is crucial and these can be found in long-term and new workers. For these, I advocate that

job

position

should be open to all interested applicants.