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Schools have the social responsibility to discourage children from eating junk food. Others think it is the parent's responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Junk
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food
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 always has been a topic of talk in the modern world. Some people think that it is
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school's
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 sole responsibility to daunt
children
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 from consuming
junk
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food
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, while others believe
parents
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 should be the ones to do so.
This
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 essay will discuss both views. Eating
junk
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food
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, despite being tasty,can cause many health issues for an individual.
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,
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school
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the school
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 should take responsibility to enlighten their
children
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 about
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 fact as they spend most of their time in
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.It can simply be done by raising awareness among pupils as well as by introducing a new subject educating them about
human
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 body and the effects of
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food
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 on it.
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,
school
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 administration can ban
junk
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food
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 from
cafeteria
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the cafeteria
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, simultaneously encouraging students to bring home-made
food
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.
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, in China schools are not allowed to distribute
junk
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food
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 to the attendees and each week
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competition is help showcasing healthy
home cooked
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food
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. Whilst, schools can teach and take measures against
junk
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food
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,
parents
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 interference is
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 necessary.
Parents
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 can cook for their offsprings a healthy diet from the beginning and control what they eat.
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, as
children
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 learn from their
parents
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,they can
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 help by teaching their wards how to cook and the benefits of cooking
home
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at home
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.
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, originators can add more vegetables and fruits in their means. By doing so,
children
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 will develop a liking
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for
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 healthy
food
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 and avoid
the
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unhealthy
one
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ones
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. In conclusion, even though
parents
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 can help their individual, I believe it can not be done alone.
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,
school
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 and
parents
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 should work together in order to get long-term benefits and
discourgae
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discourage
children
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 from eating unhealthy
food
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.
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