Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your opinion?

Some may argue that in the

future

all human workforces will be replaced by robots. While it is possible that most low skill

jobs

will be taken over by

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intelligent computers, it is still difficult for some area of work to fully rely on them.

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essay will discuss why in the end humans are still needed to do many other

jobs

.

First

, the majority of the non-complex occupation will be handle by

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in the

future

. It simply because

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robot

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the robot

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can be easily programmed to do a constant and simple job,

moreover

, companies will try their best to limit the salary expense by hiring more robots to replace the non-essential workforce. In Indonesia

for example

, they already started to create an automatic payment gate in every toll-roads.

In addition

,

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automatic gate now being implemented and more common to be found as an exit gate in the parking area. For these reasons,

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many low-level

jobs

will be replaced by

robot

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in the

future

.

On the other hand

, there are a lot of specific

jobs

that utterly cannot be substituted by another thing but human.

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condition applies because that kind of work often needs the intervere of the human brain as decision-makers. Doctors

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instance, need to analyse many aspects of patients before taking actions and receipt of proper medicines. That kind of complex decision-making process is very unique and

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will not be able to compete with humans. In conclusion, even though in the

future

robot

might take over many kinds of job, there are still numerous

jobs

that will never be replaced by

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, more specifically

jobs

that involving the decision-making process. Ultimately, the increasing number of robots as work labourers are an inevitability and only a few

jobs

will incompatible for them.