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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Although
 I suppose that
people
 in the future will be able to find more information online that was once only accessible in printed
books
 or magazines, I believe printed
books
 will not completely disappear for some reasons. On the one hand,
people
 will prefer to read electronic
books
, magazines and newspapers because they are easier to carry around.
People
 can take out their cellphone, open the chapter that they have stopped at and read a few lines whenever they are available.
As a result
, they may develop good reading habits because they spend more of their leisure time reading
instead
 of playing games.
On the other hand
, there are
people
 who enjoy the touch of book pages, which means it is still more attractive for them to own a physical book rather than reading online. In fact, many
people
 keep a huge shelf in their apartment and it is designed to hold printed
books
. These exhibited
books
 remind them of the content of those
books
 they have read previously.
Also
, it will still be necessary for
people
 to subscribe to a magazine or newspaper before they are allowed to read these materials online.
Otherwise
, publishers cannot afford the salaries of their editors and the maintenance fee for their equipment. Meanwhile, paying for the content is
also
 a way to demonstrate that the readers respect the writer's effort. In conclusion,
although
 I agree that increasing
people
 will be more likely to read online, I don't think printed materials, especially
books
, will be totally replaced by its online version and
people
 still need to pay for what they read in the future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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