Some Governments say how many children a family can have in their country should be strictly controlled. They may control the number of children someone has through taxes. Is It sometimes necessary and right for a government to control the population in this way? Do you agree or disagree with this policy? Give reasons for your answer.
Population among
children
has been increasing since
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for
last
three decades. Some authorities across the globe believe that there should be Correct article usage
the last
law
on the rise of Add an article
a law
the law
number
of Change the article
a number
the number
children
which should be controlled by imposing taxes. I totally disagree with this
kind of scheme.
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to
number
of children
as compared to taxation policy. Firstly
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of putting Correct your spelling
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the sustainable
a sustainable
government
should start imparting knowledge about Correct article usage
the government
over population
of Correct your spelling
overpopulation
children
. Apart from this
, government
use advertisement sources to spread Correct article usage
the government
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about Correct your spelling
awareness
increasing
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the increasing
number
os
population is between Correct your spelling
of
children
. In addition
, if government
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of
the birth of Change preposition
on
children
, people might feel that they are obliged by administrations
. On the other side of the coin, In some countries Correct article usage
the administrations
such
as India, children
considered as a gift of the god and it government
ties to impose laws on such
issue people might start agetation
against Correct your spelling
agitation
such
stirct
laws. For Correct your spelling
strict
istance
, Correct your spelling
instance
Indian
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the Indian
government
implemented strict law
on have
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having
children
in a family, the law
fuces
a lot of negative comments by inhabitations of Correct your spelling
faces
forces
nation
,
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the nation
a nation
However
, to some extent
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,extent
this
sort of law
is needed for government
to run the system smoothly because more and more Add an article
the government
number of
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apply
children
are create
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are creating
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a headache
of
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for
government
.
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the government
although
, it is true to some extent increasing number
of children
can make negative consequences yet, laws on this
can not be acceptable
as it takes away Replace the word
accepted
freedom
of people.Add an article
the freedom
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