Some people say that the internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to so much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

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21st century uses of the internet are tremendously escalated with all age group and it plays a vital role in an individuals life.

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many people believe that,

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web gives significant data for various topics;

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, others think that there are a few obstacles to using an excessive amount of internet which may lead to different types of issues.

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essay will substantiate views in the following paragraph with the relevant examples. To

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with, hyperspace not only provides important information but

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, it

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people's time in multiple ways

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online reading like newspapers, articles even though through internet masses could able to purchase thing online.

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, nowadays, children get many

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to do at home so they need to do deep research, collect related photographs along with detailed information, yet

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popular way to find something

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cyberspace.

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, ARPANET

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more usable in the terms of office premises for many reasons like sending emails, doing

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, as well as for making video calls and so on.

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, it is not neglectable the fact that it has few stumbling blocks.

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, immoderate use of the web may trigger crime like hacking, online

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, blackmailing together with health issues.

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, the survey conducted by the crime branch of the USA published that operating an

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by children faced abuse and blackmailing issues by social media accounts,

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lead to eyesight problems at

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age. To conclude, considering above mentioned points it is evident that, despite getting unrestricted data through cyberspace may create problems but

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do concur with it has more benefits which provide valuable information in many ways

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logically acceptable.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

288 words

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Some people say that the internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to so much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Your opinion

In schools and universities, girl tend to choose arts subjects, while boys choose science subjects. What is the reason? Should the trend be changed?

Some people believe that it’s not necessary to have internet access to live a full life. What is your opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own experience.

Nowadays some employers think that formal academic qualifications are more important than life experience or personal qualities when they look for new employees. Why is this the case? Is it a positive or negative development?

Personal experiences in leadership roles, facilitating changes, and mentoring others.