Some people say that the internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to so much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
In
this
21st century uses of the internet are tremendously escalated with all age group and it plays a vital role in an individuals life. Although
many people believe that, worldwide
web gives significant data for various topics; Add an article
the worldwide
however
, others think that there are a few obstacles to using an excessive amount of internet which may lead to different types of issues. This
essay will substantiate views in the following paragraph with the relevant examples.
To begain
with, hyperspace not only provides important information but Correct your spelling
begin
also
, it save
people's time in multiple ways Change the verb form
saves
such
as,
online reading like newspapers, articles even though through internet masses could able to purchase thing online. Remove the comma
apply
For example
, nowadays, children get many assignment
to do at home so they need to do deep research, collect related photographs along with detailed information, yet Change to a plural noun
assignments
this
is Correct your spelling
extremely
extremaly
popular way to find something Correct article usage
an extremaly
on
cyberspace. Change preposition
in
In addition
, ARPANET are
more usable in the terms of office premises for many reasons like sending emails, doing Change the verb form
is
ground work
, as well as for making video calls and so on.
Correct your spelling
groundwork
On the other hand
, it is not neglectable the fact that it has few stumbling blocks. Firstly
, immoderate use of the web may trigger crime like hacking, online abusing
, blackmailing together with health issues. Replace the word
abuse
Furthermore
, the survey conducted by the crime branch of the USA published that operating an internate
by children faced abuse and blackmailing issues by social media accounts, Correct your spelling
internet
besides
, it may also
lead to eyesight problems at earlier
age.
To conclude, considering above mentioned points it is evident that, despite getting unrestricted data through cyberspace may create problems but Add an article
an earlier
i
do concur with it has more benefits which provide valuable information in many ways Change the capitalization
I
are
logically acceptable.Correct pronoun usage
that are
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