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More and more people no longer read the newspaper or watch tv to get news. They get the news about the world through internet. Is this positive or negative development

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Nowadays, most
of
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the
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people are reading the
news
 through
internet
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instead
 of traditional
newspapers
 / TV channels. It is a positive development. In
this
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about
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it!
Earlier
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In earlier
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 days, we have to read the
news
 only through
newspapers
. Later it is much improved we watched the
news
 through TV channels In recent years, it much more updated, most of the people are using their
smart phones
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 and we have much improvement on the speed of the internet like 3G/4G and 5G networks. Since in
this
 fast-paced world, they have to travel for their day to day works. So, reading the
news
 through
newspaper
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 or watching
news
 channels
are
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 almost impossible.
Instead
, they are reading the
news
 through YouTube media or online
news
. Of course, it shows
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 positive sign because we got one more medium to read the
news
 apart from the traditional newspaper way or watching TV
news
. Having said that nowadays most
of
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the
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newspapers
 having their own online app and YouTube channel they publishing their content over there.
For example
, we have Hot star, timesofindia, the Hindu all have their own app displayed in play store / App store So,
newspapers
also
 trying to use
this
 platform to share the
news
 with the public. Overall, it helps the readers as well the publishers both adapt to a new normal To conclude, the internet is of course helping
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people around the world to get the
news
 quickly. New technological improvements are always bringing
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betterment to life. Always good changes are welcome
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