Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult such as Sahara desert or Antarctica. Do advantages outweight the disadvantage of living there.
Nowadays myriad sightseers visit
to
various places where it is extremely hard to survive Remove the preposition
apply
such
as Sahara
desert or Correct article usage
the Sahara
Antartica
because they want to t3sttheir abilities as well as gain new Correct your spelling
Antarctica
experience
thats
why they show an inclination towards that kind of destinations. Despite Correct your spelling
that's
of
having certain merits of Remove the preposition
apply
this
trend , demerits clearly outweigh its advantages.
To begin
with, there are several advantages of traveling
to that places . The predominant one is that Change the spelling
travelling
,
we can gain the superior Remove the comma
apply
experience
that play
a crucial role in our life . To elaborateChange the verb form
plays
it
, if we go there any person can test abilities, that he or she will live there or not and put themselves out from their comfort zone. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Moreover
, a person can experience
an adventurous trip inoder
to entertain themselves after the hectic lifestyle. Correct your spelling
in order
inorder
For instance
, the headline in 'Moscow Time ' revealed that every year the Indians vist
these destinations, so they can relish themselves. Correct your spelling
visit
Hence
, these two are the main benefits of going there .
On the other hand
, there are a plethora of drawbacks of traveling
there . Change the spelling
travelling
First
and foremost is that there is a chance that we can affect our health . In other words
, since the humans go there , they don't have enough knowledge how to survive there and this
result in negative on there
health . Replace the word
their
In addition
, the multifarious individuals died because there is no one to help . For example
, In Antarctica
every year peoples lost life , as humans cannot call Add a comma
,Antarctica
Correct your spelling
anyone
any one
for assist. Correct your spelling
anyone
Thus
, these are the demerits of visiting there .
To conclude, although
folks gain an altruistic experience
as well as enjoy adventurous
journey, the person lost their life and have an adverse effect on their health.Add an article
the adventurous
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