Some people seek a lot of advice from family and friends when choosing their career. Others feel it is better to choose a career more independently. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Choosing a
career
is
one
of the most important decisions in
one
's life. Some proponents argue that an individual must take guidance from family and
friends
while the opponents rebut that
one
should listen to his own guts and beliefs for selecting the profession. Personally, I believe that it is best to find
one
's
career
independently, taking a little guidance from loved ones. Below, I will explain that why I feel that our personal abilities and interests matter more than the experience of our parents and
friends
during
career
selection.
Firstly
, there are two main reasons why some believe that professional guidance should be taken from family and
friends
.
Firstly
, because elderly people have more experience and have met many people with different professions. So they can easily explain which
career
is best suitable for
one
's characteristics.
Secondly
, family and
friends
advice always helps
one
to choose the correct
career
path.
For example
, my best friend's father is an engineer, his mother is a doctor and his sister is a nurse. They all explained
their
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life experiences and difficulties they face in their professional lives. At
last
, his family members advised him to choose
engineering
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.
Hence
,
advises
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and concerns from loved ones are always helpful and promising.
On the other hand
, some argue that focussing on
one
's own preferences and skills provides a clearer path because individuals have the best knowledge of their own skillsets and personality. Only a human knows in which field they are comfortable with and can achieve great success in future.
For instance
, a student scoring well in mathematics and physics has more interest in engineering whereas someone having a good command over biology and chemistry would be inclined towards becoming a doctor/nurse. Ultimately, your
career
will be built on your own capabilities, interests and
trainings
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rather than someone's else experiences and
trainings
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. In conclusion,
Although
the advice from our family and
friends
regarding our
career
discussion will always be supportive,
one
's own personality and likings matter more. Other people cannot understand your thinking and views about the profession. They will give mixed opinions and sometimes are very confusing. At
last
, to select the field of work wisely, you should listen to your heart and brain.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • career path
  • life experience
  • emotional support
  • practical guidance
  • personal growth
  • self-discovery
  • self-reliance
  • personal satisfaction
  • ownership
  • values and expectations
  • preferences and passions
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