Some people believe that robots will play an important role in future society while others argue that robots might have negative effects on society. Discuss both of view and give your opinion.

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papulor
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popular

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seems to trigger a considerable debate. A cluster of like-minded
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voice
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that in coming days ,
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may be plays
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indespensible
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each
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and everyone's
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. Other
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taka
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a dim view
on
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it and opine that
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might be put bad impact on
puplic
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public

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lives. The upcoming
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paragraphs

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will
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analyse

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both twain side in advance of my view. The
promenent
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of former views think that
robots
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are very
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are very helping

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help ful
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helpful

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public
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in every field . To explain it, due to
hetic
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hectic
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scedule
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people
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do not have more time to do home activities because they
also
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have to do their
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properly and
home
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work
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so advancement of technology gives birth to more benefits .
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, in
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era , if
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use
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for daily
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like they can use
vaccum
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vacuum
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for dusting ,dishwashers for dishes and so on.
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,
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helps
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alots
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lots
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people
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can save their precious time for entertainment, family as well as they can enjoy
good
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life
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. Other side echelons think oppositely and voice that no doubt electronic device boon for individuals but every
coins
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has two sides.
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make
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lazy in their
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it
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reduce
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day to day
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from their
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it, if they using
every day
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for
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they reduce
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it becomes health hazards like
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gain as well as they might be not more active as compared to handwork.
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make
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easier but more difficult because if parents not working for their family
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children
children's
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never
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for them it put bad impacts on their
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, it can be summed up that no
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both side have equal arguments but
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make
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everyone's
everyones
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easier so
its
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very
benefical
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for them .

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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