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It is suggested that everyone wants to have a car, a television and a fridge. Do disadvantages of this development for society outweigh advantages?

#car #television #fridge #development #society
Possessing own cars, televisions, and fridges by every household
is
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 becoming particularly popular in these days;
however
, there are some people who are sceptical about the development whether it is positive or negative. Personally, I consider even though it seems to provide comfort in
a
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personal
life
, the repercussions of these can cause to environment and individual are immense. Admittedly, when having a personal vehicle, entertainment facility and cold food storage, the provisions tend to uplift the quality of
life
 significantly.
This
 can allow; more free time, less hard work and save money as well,
for example
, and their lives could more flexible and enjoyable. Some may
also
 argue, if these pieces of equipment were not found, they would live in an utter mess, but the environmental and personal damages caused by these products are severe and even
threat
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 to the earth as a whole.
On the other hand
, all the above-mentioned luxuries can be viewed in the opposite direction.
Firstly
, as every family owns personal cars, it has resulted in contamination of air,
consequently
, global warming
is erupted
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.
Similarly
, refrigerators
also
 emit poisonous gas to
atmosphere
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the atmosphere
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, which
deplete
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Ozone
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 layer unprecedentedly.
Finally
, when a person glued
on
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a
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television, he hardly does what he supposes to do in his day-to-day
life
.
Thus
, whatever benefits
of
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modern gadgets
brings
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 usually have side effects, which tend to destroy either human’s
life
 or
environment
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the environment
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,
sometime
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 both. In conclusion, whether having modern facilities
such
 as cars, refrigerators, and televisions has merits or demerits is argued. In my opinion, despite the comforts of these, ill-effects are certainly highlighted.
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