Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, we can see two types of people. One of them could say that you can not change the situation around you and you can not control it , but others will say try to find a solution, try to find another way. On the one hand, there are a ton of people who have an unlike job or lack of money. It is reality and not news for us.
Such
individuals will say that it is impossible to change a situation or
this
is under control. They are afraid to open their
life
to new opportunities as they need to leave their comfort zone. I have a friend who always complains about
life
. It is quite difficult to stay with him as he grabs a lot of my energy. I am trying to help him and give
some
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him some
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advice
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helps me in my
life
but
unfortunately
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it does not work for others. I believe that it must be a personal decision to change something that will bring new opportunities to
life
.
On the other hand
, it is an
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opposite experience and
view
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to the situations.
Such
people never give up and they are always trying to resolve all challenges. Sometimes it looks like a game for them.
New
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problem is like a new level. They are not afraid of
life
challenges and they are ready to dive
onto
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them.
However
, I have some friends which I describe above. It is really easy to have a conversation with them as long as they can support me. To summarize, there are two sides which are available for everyone. From my point of
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it is better to imagine problems like levels and try to pass them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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