Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Any investment made by the government should be made in order to benefit the art would help society in building a profound and rich culture;
citizens
of the country
. Investing in both, art and public welfare, are important and play a vital role in any country
's development. Investing inAdd an article
the
However
, I believe, it is important more important for a country
to invest in public services
to provide a better and secure future
to its citizens
. The benefits of better public services
on the citizens
of a country
and on its future
will prove this
.
It is the responsibility of a government towards its citizens
to provide a secure and sustainable environment to live.
Facilities Change preposition
in.
such
as electricity, internet, water, and so forth are among the basic need of any citizen. For instance
, ensuring the 24x7 availability of electricity and the internet would enable society to live a productive life. It will empower the citizens
by giving them opportunities to earn more and in turn ,help the people around them grow. Investing in public services
would not only ensure a good quality of life but also
provide better returns in future
.
To conclude, investing in public services
would be far more beneficial for a government as it would ensure a better future
and guaranteed returns.Submitted by akshits030 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite