In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasis that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, businesses often advertise their
products
as new
products
in some way. Attracting more purchaser might be the significant cause in
this
matter. I think,
however
,
this
is a negative development.
To begin
with,
companies
struggle to introduce their
products
as new in order to attract customers. Simply put, there are a vast majority
people
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of people
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interested to pursue new
products
because they tend to follow the
last
trend
products
.
Therefore
,
companies
with
focus
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a focus
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on advertising new
products
are able to gain more customers.
Also
, not only do
companies
gain more profits but
also
, they can become triumph in the
competition
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world. Take tesla
an
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as an
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example,
this
company present an automobile
which
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that
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is environmentally friendly and it is different from
traditional
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the traditional
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automobile; in
this
way
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it attracts more shoppers and become one of the largest
companies
in the world. From my point of view, perhaps
this
issue is not beneficial for
people
.
In other words
, some
companies
maybe
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may be
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manipulate
people
either
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by either
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producing
products
which
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that
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do not have good quality or packing previous
products
in the new boxes because their purpose only is
gaining
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profit. Take,
for example
, when seeing a billboard
which
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that
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advertise
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advertises
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a new product,
people
are encouraged to purchase it without knowing it has a good quality or not. If they
be
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are
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aware of
companies
’ intention, they would not manipulate. In conclusion, businesses desire to present their
products
as new because the more a product is new the more
people
buy it and I think it would be a negative development.
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